12-27-2017, 10:37 AM
(12-27-2017, 12:19 AM)Ashbury137 Wrote:(12-26-2017, 10:02 PM)Fortheseen Wrote: Death Magic(Necromancy)
Dread Spikes
Enhancing/Dark
Level: Dark Knight 2/Necromancer 4
Casting Time: 1 standard action
Range: Touch
Target: Creature touched
Duartion: 1 round/level (D)
Saving Throw: Will negates (harmless)
Spell Resistance: Yes (harmless)
A dark, eerie aura covers the subject touched by this spell. Anytime creatures attacking with natural weapons, unarmed strikes, or handheld weapons successfully strike the subject of this spell take 1d4 points of shadow damage and the subject is healed by that much.
The wording for this spell is a bit weird. You use "subject" for both the target of the spell and (I assume) for the creature making the attack against the target. I would suggest maybe saying "The subject takes... and the attacking creature is..."
Just a friendly suggestion.
It reads fine to me but I do see your point that could be confusing. I was using subject in the sense it could be used on an enemy as well as an ally. I do not know why you would want to put it on an enemy but it is an choice. I will reword it.
Those who wield red magic and blue magic are know as violet mages but very few are actually known and even fewer are actually masters of the violet magic.