10-03-2014, 04:53 PM
Leaving aside balance issues, the class doesn't exactly make sense with a monk archetype. I could see maybe making an elemental based monk as a PrC, and have some influence from Avatar: The Last Airbender (the cartoon, not the movie) for the abilities. That could even possibly be broken into four different ones for each element.
However as it is, nothing about what you made makes me think monk. Possibly Bard. Or edit it and make it a PrC, but what you have does not seem like a base class or a monk to me.
I wish you luck in your thought and revisions. I look forward to your future work.
However as it is, nothing about what you made makes me think monk. Possibly Bard. Or edit it and make it a PrC, but what you have does not seem like a base class or a monk to me.
I wish you luck in your thought and revisions. I look forward to your future work.