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(12-26-2017, 10:02 PM)Fortheseen Wrote: Death Magic(Necromancy)

Dread Spikes
Enhancing/Dark
Level: Dark Knight 2/Necromancer 4
Casting Time: 1 standard action
Range: Touch
Target: Creature touched
Duartion: 1 round/level (D)
Saving Throw: Will negates (harmless)
Spell Resistance: Yes (harmless)

A dark, eerie aura covers the subject touched by this spell. Anytime creatures attacking with natural weapons, unarmed strikes, or handheld weapons successfully strike the subject of this spell take 1d4 points of shadow damage and the subject is healed by that much.

The wording for this spell is a bit weird.  You use "subject" for both the target of the spell and (I assume) for the creature making the attack against the target.  I would suggest maybe saying "The subject takes... and the attacking creature is..." 

Just a friendly suggestion.
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Magic+ - by Fortheseen - 03-06-2017, 11:59 PM
RE: Magic+ - by Fortheseen - 03-07-2017, 12:03 AM
RE: Magic+ - by Fortheseen - 03-07-2017, 12:07 AM
RE: Magic+ - by Fortheseen - 03-07-2017, 12:08 AM
RE: Magic+ - by Fortheseen - 03-12-2017, 03:29 PM
RE: Magic+ - by Fortheseen - 04-07-2017, 10:48 PM
RE: Magic+ - by Fortheseen - 04-21-2017, 11:01 AM
RE: Magic+ - by Manly Man - 04-22-2017, 06:55 PM
RE: Magic+ - by Fortheseen - 04-23-2017, 10:21 AM
RE: Magic+ - by Manly Man - 04-23-2017, 01:42 PM
RE: Magic+ - by Fortheseen - 05-01-2017, 10:18 AM
RE: Magic+ - by Fortheseen - 05-23-2017, 11:28 AM
RE: Magic+ - by Fortheseen - 06-16-2017, 12:37 PM
RE: Magic+ - by Manly Man - 06-16-2017, 12:42 PM
RE: Magic+ - by Fortheseen - 06-19-2017, 09:50 PM
RE: Magic+ - by Fortheseen - 07-31-2017, 09:56 AM
RE: Magic+ - by Manly Man - 07-31-2017, 01:21 PM
RE: Magic+ - by Fortheseen - 08-02-2017, 10:08 AM
RE: Magic+ - by Fortheseen - 07-31-2017, 07:30 PM
RE: Magic+ - by Fortheseen - 11-23-2017, 03:43 PM
RE: Magic+ - by Fortheseen - 11-23-2017, 04:01 PM
RE: Magic+ - by Manly Man - 11-24-2017, 05:57 AM
RE: Magic+ - by Fortheseen - 11-24-2017, 09:21 PM
RE: Magic+ - by silverwerret - 11-26-2017, 12:15 AM
RE: Magic+ - by Fortheseen - 11-26-2017, 06:09 AM
RE: Magic+ - by silverwerret - 11-26-2017, 04:41 PM
RE: Magic+ - by Fortheseen - 11-26-2017, 05:52 PM
RE: Magic+ - by silverwerret - 11-26-2017, 06:19 PM
RE: Magic+ - by Fortheseen - 11-26-2017, 07:04 PM
RE: Magic+ - by Viladin - 12-20-2017, 08:59 PM
RE: Magic+ - by Fortheseen - 12-21-2017, 12:41 PM
RE: Magic+ - by Fortheseen - 12-26-2017, 10:00 PM
RE: Magic+ - by Fortheseen - 12-26-2017, 10:02 PM
RE: Magic+ - by Fortheseen - 12-26-2017, 10:59 PM
RE: Magic+ - by Ashbury137 - 12-27-2017, 12:19 AM
RE: Magic+ - by Fortheseen - 12-27-2017, 10:37 AM
RE: Magic+ - by Manly Man - 12-27-2017, 04:09 PM
RE: Magic+ - by Fortheseen - 12-28-2017, 12:15 AM
RE: Magic+ - by Fortheseen - 03-06-2018, 01:44 PM
RE: Magic+ - by Fortheseen - 03-06-2018, 02:11 PM
RE: Magic+ - by Fortheseen - 03-06-2018, 02:58 PM
RE: Magic+ - by Fortheseen - 03-06-2018, 03:01 PM
RE: Magic+ - by Fortheseen - 03-06-2018, 03:48 PM
RE: Magic+ - by Fortheseen - 03-06-2018, 04:30 PM
RE: Magic+ - by Fortheseen - 03-06-2018, 04:33 PM
RE: Magic+ - by Fortheseen - 03-09-2018, 07:50 PM
RE: Magic+ - by Fortheseen - 03-09-2018, 09:09 PM
RE: Magic+ - by Fortheseen - 09-21-2018, 12:01 PM
RE: Magic+ - by Fortheseen - 12-04-2018, 09:20 AM
RE: Magic+ - by Fortheseen - 02-24-2019, 08:39 PM

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